homework
학생이 쓴 원문
One special place to me is the park near my grandparent's house. On spring, all kinds of flowers bloom. Sometimes we'd go there and watch the flowers fly down to ground. On summer, me and my cousin would go there and play tag or hide-and-seek. On fall, my grandparents would go there and watch useless leaves fall down. Finally, on winter, our whole family would go there and sleigh on the frozen lake. The park holds all of our happy memories. These are the reasons why the park is a special place to me.
강사 첨삭
I hope you are feeling much better now [이름]!
Thanks for sharing something about that special place.
Perhaps, you always want to visit that.
Anyway, tell me more about it in class.
See you tomorrow. Take care!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
One special place to me is the park near my grandparent\'s house.
>>> Correct!
On spring, all kinds of flowers bloom.
>>> Correct!
Sometimes we\'d go there and watch the flowers fly down to ground.
>>> Sometimes we\'s go there and watch the flowers\'s petals fall to the ground.
On summer, me and my cousin would go there and play tag or hide-and-seek.
>>> In summer, my cousin and I would go there and play tag or hide-and-seek.
On fall, my grandparents would go there and watch useless leaves fall down.
>>> In fall, my grandparents would go there and watch the useless leaves fall down.
Finally, on winter, our whole family would go there and sleigh on the frozen lake.
>>> Finally, in winter, our whole family would go there and sleigh on the frozen lake.
The park holds all of our happy memories.
>>> Correct!
These are the reasons why the park is a special place to me.
>>> Correct!
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