homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Composition making: If you could master a skill, what would it be and why?
If I could master a skill, I'd like to master how to fix the computer.
I use computer everyday so when the computer id broken, I feel nervous and frustrated.
Then to fix it, I have to go to the center or call the machenics to fix it.
I really want to master how to fix it
강사 첨삭
HI there Miss [이름]!
How are you?
Are you still waiting for your phone to be fixed?
Anyway, don\'t skip lunch okay?
I\'ll check your other homework. C\")
~Teacher Shanee^^,
If I could master a skill, I\'d like to master how to fix the computer.
>>> Correct!
I use computer everyday so when the computer id broken, I feel nervous and frustrated.
I use computer everyday so when the computer id broken, I feel nervous and frustrated.
>>> I use a computer every day so when the computer is broken, I feel nervous and frustrated.
Then to fix it, I have to go to the center or call the machenics to fix it.
Then to fix it, I have to go to the center or call the machenics to fix it.
>>> Then to fix it, I have to go to the center or call a technician.
I really want to master how to fix it
I really want to master how to fix it
>>> I really master how to fix computers.
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