homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Are there any famous people you would like to meet? Who and what would you say to him/her?
When I was young, I was a big fan of H.O.T. There were 5 members in this group.
I was so eager to meet them and I got lots of lame questions. Some people told me that why yo want to know about his favorites and interests but I wanted to know everything about him because I loved him. however as I grow up, I cannot understand what I did like that. Of course, I am interested in the celebraties but I am not interested in their personal lives.
강사 첨삭
Hi again Miss [이름]!
It\'s just normal that we get interested in the personal lived of the celebrities that we like.
It\'s just normal that we get interested in the personal lived of the celebrities that we like.
Sometimes, I also research about the recent activities and even the family background of the stars that I like.
So there\'s no need to question yourself.C\")
~Teacher Shanee^^,
When I was young, I was a big fan of H.O.T.
>>> Correct!
There were 5 members in this group.
>>> Correct!
I was so eager to meet them and I got lots of lame questions.
I was so eager to meet them and I got lots of lame questions.
>>> Correct!
Some people told me that why yo want to know about his favorites and interests but I wanted to know everything about him because I loved him.
>>> Some people asked me why I want to know about the members favorites and interests. They didn\'t know that it\'s because I loved them.
however as I grow up, I cannot understand what I did like that.
>>> However as I grew up, I couldn\'t understand why I did those things.
Of course, I am interested in the celebraties but I am not interested in their personal lives.
>>> Of course, I am interested in celebrities but I am not interested in their personal lives.
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