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2017-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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If you only have two days to live, how would you spend it? I got this question before and I though about what I should do for making my 2days very special and meaningful. So I planed alot like meeting people, going somewhere, spending all money that I have. However, for now I want to do the same things as usuasl. I just want to spend time with my family.

강사 첨삭

How is it going Miss [이름]?
It is already lunch time here and I am starving.
Maybe you are too. Talk to you tomorrow.C\")

~Teacher Shanee^^,

If you only have two days to live, how would you spend it?

I got this question before and I though about what I should do for making my 2days very special and meaningful. 
>>> I got this question before and I thought about what I should do to make my remaining 2 days special and meaningful.
So I planed alot like meeting people, going somewhere, spending all money that I have. 
>>> So I planned a lot of things like meeting people, going to some places and spending all the money that I have.
However, for now I want to do the same things as usuasl. 
>>> However, I realized now that I want to do my usual routine.
I just want to spend time with my family.
>>> Correct!

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