homework
학생이 쓴 원문
We can clearly see how rapid technology is advancing. Can you think of any negative effects of technology to our lives? Write about them.
I think there is always black and white. Technology makes us comfortable and everytnig easy but it makes us foolish sometimes. We trust the technology too much so
when the machines stops working then we dont know what to do. I feel like we are slaves of the technology.
강사 첨삭
You are right Miss [이름]!
We are too dependent on technology.
It is true that technology made our lives easy. However, we must be very careful because it is also affecting some aspects of our lives.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I think there is always black and white.
>>> Correct!
Technology makes us comfortable and everytnig easy but it makes us foolish sometimes.
>>> Technology makes us comfortable and makes everything easy but it also makes us foolish sometimes.
We trust the technology too much so when the machines stops working then we dont know what to do.
>>> We trust technology too much so when the machines stop working, we don\'t know what to do.
I feel like we are slaves of the technology.
>>> I feel like we are slaves of technology.
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