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학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me about a libel case you will never forget.
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In my case, sometimes I feel the libel when I work in the company.
I try not to make a mistake when I work.
But I am a human, so sometimes I make a mistake,at that time, some boss said to me why did you do like that and why didn't you think another way.
When I heard that kind of words, I feel libel.
As you know, I am introvert, so I have to endure when I heard that kind of words.
It's sad thing because I am company worker.
If I were a rich man, I have no reason to endure when I heard that words.
Anyway when I work in the company, I think better life of my family.
So, I can work pleasantly.
강사 첨삭
You got it, my friend!
Thank you for sharing. I hope your bosses won\'t be too harsh. Relax, James, and just continue with what you\'re doing. It is good that your family inspires your most. Rest assured that they appreciate what you are doing for them.
Take it easy at work now.
Stay awesome!
-Klein-
Tell me about a libel case you will never forget.==>In my case, sometimes I feel the libel when I work in the company.>>In my case, sometimes I feel there\'s libel when I work in the company.
I try not to make a mistake when I work.
>>CorrectBut I am a human, so sometimes I make a mistake,at that time, some boss said to me why did you do like that and why didn\'t you think another way.>>But I am human, so sometimes I make a mistake and at that time, some boss tells me, \"Why did you do that and why didn\'t you think of another way?\"
When I heard that kind of words, I feel libel.>>When I heard that kind of words, I felt it\'s libel.
>>When I hear those kinds of words, I feel it\'s libel.
As you know, I am introvert, so I have to endure when I heard that kind of words.>>Correct
It\'s sad thing because I am company worker.>>It\'s a sad thing because I am a company worker.
If I were a rich man, I have no reason to endure when I heard that words.>>If I were a rich man, I had no reason to endure when I heard those words.
Anyway when I work in the company, I think better life of my family.>>Anyway, when I work in the company, I think of a better life for my family.
So, I can work pleasantly.
>>Correct!
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