Homework

Dear [이름],

A wonderful Tuesday to you! ^.^

First of all, I would like to thank you for doing your homework! ^^

You did well! ^^,

Keep it up! ^^.

However, I still want you to check the things that I put below.

It is for you to improve your English skill more.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: Therefore, don\'t forget to share files if you have. ^.^

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. Do these awards and prizes serve a useful purpose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

Yes, I agree.

>> CORRECT!

In my opinion, awards and prizes make someone motivated.

>> CORRECT!

So that they could create wonderful things such as books, media, music etc. and try to do their best than before.

>> They are given so that people or employees could create wonderful things such as books, media, music, etc., and for them to try their best.

>> OR: They are given so that people or employees could create wonderful things such as books, media, music, etc., and for them to do their best.

>> OR: They are given so that people or employees could create wonderful things such as books, media, music, etc., and for them to try do better than before.

Moreover, awards and prizes can show best works to others, and share their pieces and intelligence to other people!

>> Moreover, awards and prizes can show best works to others and share their pieces and intelligence to other people!

>> OR: Moreover, awards and prizes can show best works to others and share their pieces and intelligence to other people.

It\'s such a great opportunity to everyone.

>> CORRECT!

So I think awards and prizes serve a useful purpose.
>> Therefore, I think awards and prizes serve a useful purpose.

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Oh, our website did renewal!

>> Oh! Our website did some updates!

We can share some files!

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: We can share some files.

Wow!! >_<

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Wow! >.<