homework

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Teacher Sophia

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I think news should be pursue the objectiveness; news have to evade the biased thought and apply a neutral criterion to their articles.

>> I think news should pursue its objective, evade from the bias minds and apply neutralization.
The prime goal of news is giving readers information, and guarantee the readers’ right of knowing.

>> The prime goal of news is giving the readers an accurate information about something.

And people also want to know what truth is.

>> People want to know the truth.

So journalists should try to conveying only the truth. 

>> So, the journalists should convey the truth. 

However, we have to consider the limits that there might be some bias.

>> However, we also need to consider that some have biases in writing news.

Because journalists might have prejudices since they are also a human.

>> Journalists are humans so they also have some prejudices.

However objective they are, subjectiveness intervenes even the process that which articles are selected in newspaper, and which articles are positioned in a prime page. 

>> The news they write might be objectively or subjectively written.
Therefore readers should have critical consciousness about news and refer to divergent voices.

>> Therefore the readers should be critical in reading news.

If you do not act like that, your thought will be led by journals and you cannot find real truth.

>> If you are not critical, you might end up lost and you will be persuaded to think the way the journalist think.