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When you’re feeling indolent but you got plenty of stuff to do, how do you manage it?
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Sometimes I am feeling that I want to take a rest and anything to do it.
But at that time, generally I have many works to do.
So I cannot take a rest, but because of that the quality of work is lowered.
There was no merit when I work without break because my body wants refresh.
So I take a break very short time, after that I return to the work.
Small indolent thing can increase the ability of work and help our body refresh.
Anyway I have many things to do, but my body and mental condition is not good,
I take a short time break for me.
It makes me energizer and I can restart the work powerfully.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, James!
I like the way you think! I would like to do the same.
Thank you for the reminder. You always inspire me in many ways.
I wish you all the best, my friend.
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-Klein-
When you’re feeling indolent but you got plenty of stuff to do, how do you manage it?==>Sometimes I am feeling that I want to take a rest and anything to do it.
>>Sometimes I feel I want to take a rest and do everything to do it.But at that time, generally I have many works to do.>>But at that time, generally, I have much work to do.
So I cannot take a rest, but because of that the quality of work is lowered.>>So, I cannot take a rest; but because of that, the quality of work is lowered.
There was no merit when I work without break because my body wants refresh.>>There is no merit when I work without break because my body wants refreshment.
So I take a break very short time, after that I return to the work.>>So, I take a break for a very short time. After that, I return to work.
Small indolent thing can increase the ability of work and help our body refresh.>>I small indolent thing can increase the ability to work and help refresh our body.
Anyway I have many things to do, but my body and mental condition is not good,>>Correct!
I take a short time break for me. >>I take a short break time for myself.
It makes me energizer and I can restart the work powerfully.
>>It makes me energized, so I can restart working powerfully.
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