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Very well said, Sir!
While salary plays a vital role, we must also consider if it meets our self-actualization needs :)
A decade ago, my high school teacher told me to choose 3 things wisely: university major, job, and husband^^
Until now, hose are the things I still deliberately think about.
Where does job satisfaction come from?
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Just to name a few, it seems to come from salary, a better working atmosphere, more challenges in job, job stability, extra holidays, the location of workplace, and so on.
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Needless to say, salary among them is the most decisive and important factor for job satisfaction.
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According to a survey on job satisfaction, more than two third of the respondents were dissatisfied with their salary, saying it wasn\'t in proportion to their workload.
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What\'s more, only 1% of them said they were overpaid.
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And more than half of them answered wage as a reason for their intention to change jobs.
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There must be a clear link between salary satisfaction and the intention to change jobs.
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Having said that, I can\'t completely agree that big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
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I strongly recommended that youths have to choose their jobs based on their dreams, aptitude, and challenges.
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It\'s because my job is a crucial part of my whole life, and in fact I work not for an employer but for me.
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