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2017-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Write an essay about a special place to you. Include the reason/s why it's special. My special place is my room. I put furniture that I need and I can do many things in my room. It has lots of funtions. It can be my office when I need to work, It can be a massage shop when I am tired. It can be the movie theater when I want it watch movie. I am so comfy when I am in my room.

강사 첨삭

We\'re just the same Miss [이름]! For me, my room is also the most special place for me. Just like you, I can do anything in my room. Haha! See you later. ~Teacher Shanee^^,   Write an essay about a special place to you. Include the reason/s why it\'s special.My special place is my room. >>> Correct!I put furniture that I need and I can do many things in my room. >>> I can put the furniture that I need and do many things in my room.It has lots of funtions. >>> Correct! It can be my office when I need to work, It can be a massage shop when I am tired. >>> It can be my office when I need to work and my massage shop when I need to relax.It can be the movie theater when I want it watch movie. >>> It can be my movie theater when I want to watch a movie.I am so comfy when I am in my room. >>> Correct! >>> OR: I feel so comfy [comfortable] when I am in my room.

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