Homework

2017-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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-Homework- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. I think that with the help of technology, students now -adays can learn more information and learn it more quick -ly. There are three reasons. The first reason is the n -ew technology can help us to understand it. The second reason is a small PC is lighter than a lots of books. Th -e third reason is saving and etc are easy. The first reason is the new technology can help us to understand it. We can use more program in order to study if we use new technology while the normal books can't do it. The second reason is a small PC is lighter than a lot -s of books. If we have to use books they are very heavy .But small PC is lighter than a lot of books. The third reason is saving and etc are easy. When we write something that we learn, it needs a lot of time. But PC are not.

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-Homework-

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn
more information and learn it more quickly.              

I think that with the help of technology, students now

-adays can learn more information and learn it more quick

-ly.

>> I think that with the help of technology, students now-

adays can learn more information and learn them more quick-

ly.

There are three reasons.

>> CORRECT!

The first reason is the n

-ew technology can help us to understand it.

>> The first is the new

technology can help us understand it.

>> OR: The first is the

new technology can help us to understand it.

The second  

reason is a small PC is lighter than a lots of books.

>> CORRECT!

Th

-e third reason is saving and etc are easy.

>> The third reason is saving and other things are easy.

>> OR: The third reason is saving, copying, etc. are easy.

The first reason is the new technology can help us to 

understand it.

>> The first reason is the new technology can help us

understand it.

We can use more program in order to study

if we use new technology while the normal books can\'t do 
it.

>> We can use more programs in order to study better

if we use the new technology while we can\'t do it

by the normal books.

The second reason is a small PC is lighter than a lot

-s of books.

>> The second reason is a small PC is lighter than a lot

of books.

>> OR: The second reason is a small PC is lighter than lots

of books.

If we have to use books they are very heavy

.

>> If we use books, we will feel heavy.

But small PC is lighter than a lot of books.

>> However, a small PC is lighter than a lot of books.

The third reason is saving and etc are easy.

>> The reason is saving, copying, etc. are easy.

When we

write something that we learn, it needs a lot of time.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: When we

write something that we learn, we need a lot of time to do it.

But PC are not.

>> However, doing it using a PC doesn\'t.

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