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2017-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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My favorite movie is Back to The future. It is a series with three movies. It's about a mad scientist and a high school boy named Marty and the Doctor's dog, Einstein. The mad scientist is called Doc, and he invented a time machine. During the first movie, it mostly tells about how, exactly the time machine works and how to get Marty back to his timeline. During the second movie, Marty, Doc, and Einstein travels to future and changes the past from there, which caused a huge problem in the time they were living in. Finally, during the third and final movie, Marty got lost in the time travel and ended up at the west, but got lucky and found Doc there. Marty safely went back home. If I could change one thing from the movie, it'd be to make the dog talk. I thought maybe since Doc is a mad scientist, he might have all kinds of weird machines including translator for dogs. As I watched the movie. I often wondered what the dog was thinking, and I might make the movie funnier.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I remember you mentioned about this movie before. If I am not mistaken, you also told me that it\'s your father\'s favorite movie. I got interested in it. I might watch it this weekend. Haha.C\") Anywy, see you tomorrow.   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   My favorite movie is Back to The future. >>> Correct! It is a series with three movies. >>> OR: It is a trilogy. It\'s about a mad scientist and a high school boy named Marty and the Doctor\'s dog, Einstein. >>> It\'s about a mad scientist, ahigh school boy named Marty and the doctor\'s dog, Einstein. The mad scientist is called Doc, and he invented a time machine. >>> Correct! During the first movie, it mostly tells about how, exactly the time machine works and how to get Marty back to his timeline. >>> Correct! During the second movie, Marty, Doc, and Einstein travels to future and changes the past from there, which caused a huge problem in the time they were living in. >>> During the second movie, Marty, Doc and Einstein traveled to the future and changed the past from there which caused a huge problem in the present time. Finally, during the third and final movie, Marty got lost in the time travel and ended up at the west, but got lucky and found Doc there. >>> Correct! Marty safely went back home. >>> Correct! If I could change one thing from the movie, it\'d be to make the dog talk. >>> Correct! I thought maybe since Doc is a mad scientist, he might have all kinds of weird machines including translator for dogs. >>> Correct! As I watched the movie. I often wondered what the dog was thinking, and I might make the movie funnier. >>> As I watched the movie, I often wondered about what the dog was thinking. I might also make the movie funnier.

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