Homework

Dear [이름],

A great Thursday to you! ^.^

First of all, I would like to thank you for making a well-composed writing.

You explained your points well.

Very good! ^^

Anyway, happy reading! ^^.

See you soon! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.


I can\'t pick only one skill to people should learn in order to be successful in the world.

>> I can\'t pick one skill that people should learn in order to be successful in the world.

>> OR: I can\'t pick one skill that people should learn in order to be successful in the world.

It\'s because there are so many things we need to learn to success.

>> It\'s because there are so many things we need to learn to succeed.

>> OR: It\'s because there are so many things we need to learn to be successful.

And I think that skills are passion, volition, endeavor, patience, and positive mind.
>> In addition, I think that a person should have passion, volition, endeavor, patience, and positive mind.
If people don\'t have the passion and volition, they can try anything.

>> If a person doesn\'t have passion and volition, he or she can\'t try anything.

If people don\'t do any effort, and don\'t have the endurance, they can\'t try something steadily.

>> If a person doesn\'t do any effort and have the endurance, he or she can\'t try anything steadily.

>> OR:  If a person doesn\'t do any effort and have the endurance, he or she can\'t try anything continuously.

And If people don\'t have the positive mind, they can easily give up.

>> In addition, if a person doesn\'t have a positive mind, he or she will easily give up.

So, I think all of these things are important to live a successful live, and get what we want.

>> Therefore, I think all of these are important for us to live successful lives and get what we want.