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2017-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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My favorite saying is: 'I heard the old, old man say "All that's beautiful drifts away, like the waters."' One reason why I like this saying is because it's so true. Every beautiful thing disappears at some point. It might be why those things are beautiful, because if every beautiful thing exists forever, the reason why it makes those things so beautiful disappears and it'd become common. The old man was right in his own way, but I think it might be good for some things to drift away like water, because I learned that human only appreciates things when it's drifted away. It's almost like we only know one thing's worth when it is finally gone. So I think the reason why I like this saying is because it's so true.

강사 첨삭

You are completely right [이름]! I agree with you. That quotation has a beautiful meaning and you interpreted it well. Anyway, in my case, my favorite is this: “It\'s not up to you how you fall. Its up to you how far you let yourself fall and how long it takes you to get back up and stand on your own two feet.\" I always get motivated whenever I read this. Let\'s talk about its meaning on Monday. Enjoy!   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   My favorite saying is: \'I heard the old, old man say \"All that\'s beautiful drifts away, like the waters.\"\' >>> My favorite saying is: \"I heard the old, old, men say \'All that\'s beautiful drifts away like the waters.\' \" One reason why I like this saying is because it\'s so true. >>> Correct! Every beautiful thing disappears at some point. >>> Correct! It might be why those things are beautiful, because if every beautiful thing exists forever, the reason why it makes those things so beautiful disappears and it\'d become common. >>> Correct! The old man was right in his own way, but I think it might be good for some things to drift away like water, because I learned that human only appreciates things when it\'s drifted away. >>> The old men were right in their own way, but I think it might be good for some things to drift away like water because I learned that humans only appreciate things when they already drifted away. It\'s almost like we only know one thing\'s worth when it is finally gone. >>> Correct! So I think the reason why I like this saying is because it\'s so true. >>> Correct!

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