Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What should you do to prevent your language from becoming languid?
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First of all, I am talking with you for preventing my language from becoming languid.
It was difficult to start learning English with Power English.
Because I just thought in my mind that I have to study English.
And I don't have a time at night, because many things are occurred at that time.
So I chose the morning class for reducing my absence.
I will continue to practice with you speaking English.
Second. I make a sentence in English. In my case I use the homework.
I wrote down the English sentence and I try to write what i think.
Third, I listen that English speakers are saying in the smart phone.
There are many lectures like a TED.
It is easy to find English presentation on line.
It helps me my listening skill upgrade.
There are a lot of method that I do to prevent your language from becoming languid.
Anyway, thinking in English, speaking in English, writing in English is important.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, James!
Thank you for telling me the ways you follow to prevent your language from becoming languid. All I can say is KEEP IT UP!
I am very happy to know that you are doing what you can to maintain and somehow improve your English communication skills. Hang in there, my friend. In time, you will reap the fruits. Let me know if there is something else I can help you with.
Until then!
Have a wonderful weekend ahead!
-Klein-
What should you do to prevent your language from becoming languid?==>First of all, I am talking with you for preventing my language from becoming languid.>>First of all, I am talking with you to prevent my language from becoming languid.
It was difficult to start learning English with Power English. Because I just thought in my mind that I have to study English.>>It was difficult to start learning English with Power English, because I just thought that I had to study English.
>>It was difficult to start learning English with Power English, because in my mind I had to study English.
And I don\'t have a time at night, because many things are occurred at that time.>>And I don\'t have time at night, because there are many things that occur at that time.
So I chose the morning class for reducing my absence. >>So I chose the morning class to reduce my absence.
I will continue to practice with you speaking English.>>I will continue practicing English with you.Second. I make a sentence in English.
>>Correct
OR >> Secondly, I make a sentence in English.
In my case I use the homework.>>Correct
I wrote down the English sentence and I try to write what i think.>>I think what I have to write in English sentences.Third, I listen that English speakers are saying in the smart phone.>>Thirdly, I listen to English speakers speaking on the smartphone.
There are many lectures like a TED. >>There are many lectures like on TED.
It is easy to find English presentation on line.>>It is easy to find an English presentation online.
>>It is easy to find English presentations online.
It helps me my listening skill upgrade.>>It helps me upgrade my listening skill.
There are a lot of method that I do to prevent your language from becoming languid.>>There are a lot of methods that I do to prevent my language from becoming languid.
Anyway, thinking in English, speaking in English, writing in English is important.
>>Anyway, thinking in English, speaking in English, and writing in English are important.
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