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2017-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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Composition Writing: Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer - items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice. My Opinion is I prefer made by machine. I had a time that I like hand craft. But I realized that some hand crafts were weak, so it was easy to broken. Of course, hand crafts are sometimes look wonderful! but that is all. Machine is accurate more than human's hand I think.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sophia! ^^


Thank you for telling me what your opinion is and also, have a great weekend.


All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==


My Opinion is I prefer made by machine. I had a time that I like hand craft.
But I realized that some hand crafts were weak, so it was easy to broken.
Of course, hand crafts are sometimes look wonderful! but that is all.

Machine is accurate more than human\'s hand I think.

>> I prefer machine-made products even though there was a time when I liked handicrafts. I like machine-made goods because machines make the products in a more accurate and precise way while handicrafts or hand-made products are usually easily broken or are quite fragile even though they are aesthetically pleasing.

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