homework
학생이 쓴 원문
**Can you give 2 benefits from using a computer?
Once of week, Our class announce new subject that I want.
So,I can announce in front of the class from using a computer
And Ican reserch unknown of information from using a computer.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. Please check my corrections my dear. Anyway, please keep up the good work in class!^^
Have a great day! :)
~T. Kelly^^
Once of week, Our class announce new subject that I want.
>> Once a week, our class studies a new subject that I want.
So,I can announce in front of the class from using a computer.
>> So, I can share in front of the class something about our subject using the computer.
And Ican reserch unknown of information from using a computer.
>> And, I can also search unknown information using the computer.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.