Homework

Dear [이름],

A cool Monday to us! ^.^

First of all, I would like to thank you for doing your homework! ^^

You did well! ^^,

Keep it up! ^^.

However, I still want you to check the things that I put below.

It is for you to improve your English skill more.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher [이름]a ... ^.~

P.S.: Thanks for giving me more information about Korean History! ^.^

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Self-confidence is the most important factor for success in school or at work.

I agree to the statement.

>> CORRECT!

There are two reasons.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I have two reasons to support my answer.

The first reason is it makes us working or studying well.

>> The first is it makes us work or study well.

For example, when the sportsmans take charms, they belieave themselves.

>> For example, when the sportsmen take charms, they believe in themselves.

And then they play better than they don\'t take charms.

>> Then, they play better than when they don\'t have their charms.

>> OR: Then, they play better than when they don\'t bring their charms.

The second reason is we can live better

>> The second reason is we can live better.

We can have more confidence.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: We can be more confident.

Then, they can live activitly.

>> Then, we can live actively.

Also, you can makes more friends ,too!

>> In addition, we can make more friends.

IT make us happy.

>> It makes us happy.

These are why I agree to the statement.

>> CORRECT!

Korean History

King Sejong ,the fourth king of Joseon, make Joseon stonger, happyer, and richly.

>> King Sejong, the fourth king of Joseon, made the kingdom stronger, happier and richer.

He makesome new farm technology and he makes many kins of cannons.

>> He made some new farm technology, and he made many kinds of cannons.

Also, he make the Hangl.

>> Furthermore, he made Hangul.