homework

HELLO [이름],

Thank you for sharing your opinion.

I do agree with you that E-books are more convenient to use but I still prefer reading paper books. 

Maybe, I\'m an old fashioned girl. kkk 

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

Many people think that E-books will thoroughly substitute paper books some day.

>> CORRECT  

Because the market size of paper books have continuously diminished while that of E-books have increased. 

>>  CORRECT  
According to the people who agree with the above idea, the biggest reason is convenience of using E-books.

>> According to the people who agree with the above idea, the biggest reason is the convenience of using E-books.  

A E-book is light than paper book since only one E-book device can store almost infinite books.

>> E-books are lighter than paper books and you can store many E-books in one device.

Also users can utilize diverse contents such as videos and musics as well as texts and pictures.

>> Users can utilize the contents from videos, musics, texts and pictures.
On the other hand, some people say E-books never thoroughly displaces paper books.

>> On the other hand, some people say that E-books thoroughly displaces paper books.

This is due to the fact that the feeling which papers give cannot be substitute by the E-books.

>> This is due to the feeling you get from reading paper books which can\'t be substituted by E-books.

Also, people can use assorted writing tools such as pens only when they use paper-books.

>>In addition, people can use writing tools such as pens in reading paper books.
In conclusion, I think E-books will substitute paper books some day, but it will takes so much time.

>> In conclusion, I think, E-books will substitute paper books some day but it will take so much time.

If technology will develope to a large extent and E-book can imitate all the feeling of papers, paper books would be removed.

>> If the technology will develop to a large extent and E-books can capture the feelings that it gets from reading paper books then paper books would be removed.