homework

HELLO [이름],

Thank you for telling me your opinion about this matter.

I agree with you that photographs can be recreated or altered.

The public has lost trust in the media. 

We have to be ambassadors of the truth, we have to hold ourselves to a higher standard because the public no longer trusts the media.

We are considered merchants of misery and therefore get a bad rap.

It seems that the honor system is not working. Editors need to be a little tougher and demand those raw files to see the timelines and those mistakes when there is a suspicion that something is not correct.

Photojournalists and photo editors have serious responsibilities to the viewers of their images, and clarity, accuracy and transparency are our allies.

have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

Average people meet many photographs in the newspaper almost everyday and take it for granted without any dubiousness.

>> CORRECT 

While some people think that there might be manipulations in the pictures.

>>   CORRECT 
According to the people who believe the photographs in the newspaper, it is enough believable because we can see the pictures, and if there are some manipulation, a expert can become aware of that.

>> According to the people who believe on the photographs seen on the newspaper, it is believable because we are not experts to be aware whether the photo is fake or real.
On the other hand, some people don\'t thoroughly believe the photograph, because pictures can be changed perfectly as the development of photograph\'s technology .

>> On the other hand, some people don\'t thoroughly believe in what they see on the photograph because pictures can be altered due to the development of technology.

For example, North Korea have manipulate many picture in the their newspapers.

>> For example, North Korea has manipulated many pictures in their newspapers.

Also, pictures could be seen differently consequent on the angle of the camera.

>> CORRECT  

Therefore pictures don\'t display the truth but demonstrate what photographer want to display.

>>   Therefore pictures don\'t display the truth but demonstrate what photographer wants to display.
In conclusion, photograph is helpful to understand the news, but it can be exploited to make the false the truth.

>> In conclusion, photographs are helpful to understand the news but it can be exploited to make fake the truth.

So, readers have to pay more attention to the photograph in the newspapers.

>> So, readers have to be keen in identifying false and real photographs in newspapers.