Homework

Dear [이름],

A terrific Tuesday to you! ^.^

Thank you for doing your homework! ^^

Anyway, I totally agree to your answer.

I really think that people look for activities that will help them relieve their stress.

Those are activities that will help them forget their troubles even for a short period of time.

In my case, I want to do dangerous sports, because I like the feeling of danger.

I can feel that my body becomes stronger when I do unsafe activities.

I really like the feeling.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.


I don\'t like dangerous things actually.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Actually, I don\'t like dangerous things.

>> OR: I don\'t actually like dangerous things.

But ironically sometimes I do dangerous sports to feel thrill.

>> However, ironically, I sometimes do dangerous sports to feel thrill.

>> OR: Actually, I don\'t like dangerous things, but ironically, I sometimes do dangerous sports to feel thrill.

kkk.

>> Kkk.

>> OR: Kkk!

I think it\'s one of the human\'s odd habits.

>> CORRECT!

Eventhough I don\'t like the feeling of danger and scared, I can blow the stress because of it.

>> Even though I don\'t like the feeling of danger and scare, I can blow stress because of it.

So I can\'t give up to ride the dangerous rides.

>> Therefore, I can\'t give up riding dangerous rides.

>> OR: Therefore, I can\'t give riding dangerous rides up.