Homework.

Dear [이름],

A terrific Tuesday to you! ^.^

First of all, I would like to thank you for doing your homework! ^^

You answered the given question very well.

However, I also come to realize that hard working is useless if you don\'t have any abilities.

In my opinion, hardworking and abilities that we are born with go hand in hand.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you soon! ^^.

... Teacher [이름]a ... ^.~

Which is more important for success: the natural ability you are born with or hard work?


I think that hard work is more important than natural ability.

>> CORRECT!

There are two reason

>> There are two reasons.

The first reason is danything can\'t win the try.

>> The first reason is anything can\'t be won if not tried.

The second reason is it is we fell great than ability we are born with.

>> The second reason is it is better for us to do things great than rely on abilities we are born with.

The first reason is danything can\'t win the try.

>> The first reason is anything can\'t be won if not tried.

Most of the success men or women work hard in order to success.

>> Most successful men and women work hard in order to succeed.

>> OR: Most successful men and women work hard in order to reach their goals.

For example, Edison try 1,000 times in order to make the light.

>> For example, Edison tried 1,000 times in order to make the first light bulb.

The second reason is it is we fell great than ability we are born with.

>> The second reason is it is better for us to do things great than rely on abilities we are born with.

The object that is nake you alone is feel more great than make with others.

>> You feel prouder when you make a thing alone than when you make a thing with other people.

>> OR: You feel greater when you make a thing alone than when you make a thing with other people.

Korean History

1559.A.D, Doyotomy, the first leader of unity Japan, desides to attack Joseon.

>> In 1559 A.D., Toyotomi, the first leader of the unit of Japan, decided to attack Joseon.

Sunjo, the king of Joseon, leave the capital (Seoul).

>> Sunju, the king of Joseon, left the capital (Seoul).

Many people died.

>> CORRECT!

But Joseon Navy general Iy Soon-sin had 38 battles and win 38 times.

>> However, Joseon Navy General Soon-Sin had 38 battles and won 38 times.

Thnk for him, invaders went back.

>> Thanks for him. The invaders went back to their country.