Homework

Dear [이름],

A wondrous Thursday to you! ^.^

First of all, I would like to thank you for doing your homework! ^^

You answered the given question very well.

However, I also come to realize that hard working is useless if you don\'t have any abilities.

In my opinion, hard work and innate abilities go hand in hand.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.:

I think the rain can make you sleepy and can stop you from doing something.

However, it helped you concentrate on your homework.

Anyway, I also hope that the rain can clean everything.

Anyhow, I am gladder that you are my student. ^.^

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Which is more important for success: the natural ability you are born with or hard work?

Both of them are important element for success, but I think hard work is more important than natural ability.

>> Both of them are important elements for success, but I think hard work is more essential than natural ability.

It\'s because, the person who have the natural ability is outstanding at first time, but if they careless on their doing consistently, they failed.

>> It\'s because the person who has that ability can be outstanding at first, but if he or she is careless on their doing consistently, that person will fail.

Also, sometimes the person who don\'t have the natural ability, can success because of their effort.

>> In addition, sometimes, the person who doesn\'t have any inborn abilities can succeed because of his or her effort.

It means, everyone need effort.

>> It means everyone needs effort.

And effort is never betrayal.

>> Moreover, effort is never a betrayal.

So I think hard work is one of the most important things for success.

>> Therefore, I think hard work is one of the most important things for success.

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It\'s raining all day long in Seoul, Korea.

>> CORRECT!

I like sunny day, but the sound of rain is so nice to hear.

>> I like sunny days, but the sound of the rain is so nice to hear.

I\'m doing my homework while I listening that sounds.

>> I\'m doing my homework while listening to that sound.

I hope that rain remove the dust in the air.

>> I hope that the rain removes the dust in the air.

By the way, I\'m so glad you to be a my English teacher!

>> By the way, I\'m so glad you are my English teacher!

I will do my best to improve my English with you!

>> CORRECT!

Also, thank you for always cheering and consulting me!

>> Furthermore, thank you for always cheering me up and for checking my condition.

See you later

>> See you later.

>> OR: See you later!