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Shopping on-line has many advantages and at the same time many disadvantages.

For me, there are three advantages of on-line shopping.

First, it\'s accessible. Online shopping allows you to shop from any vendor, at any time, anywhere in the world. Virtual window shopping enables all users to shop at their leisure and across multiple marketplaces.

Second, it\'s time saving. You no longer have to get in your car and have to drive to the mall to shop. There are no lines and you can come back to your cart whenever you want.

Third, there are online deals and promotions. Before you checkout, you can scour the Internet for online coupon codes or special discounts. Many companies send coupons to their customers who have opted into their email marketing campaigns, delivering them with the latest product or service information and what current promotions they are currently holding.

There are also three disadvantages of on-line shopping.

First, though some companies offer free flat rate shipping, it still may come at a cost. For instance, a clothing store may offer free shipping but at a minimum of a $50 purchase.

Second, if you\'re an impatient person, waiting for your product to be delivered can be a pain. There is a lack of instant gratification and even possibilities of delay when it comes to receiving your items.

Third, if an item comes damaged or not as described, you will want to return the item or be refunded your money. Depending on where you purchased your item, there can be different policies for refunds and returns; this process is tedious and is prolonged since you would have to ship back the item and wait on the seller to refund your payment.

The list can go on and on for the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. Instead of creating pros and cons list, you should discover ways to become a better online shopper in the event you do want to purchase items online.

Have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

As the development of the information communication technology, the size of on-line shopping market escalates uninterruptly.

>> As the development of the information communication technology, the size of on-line shopping market escalates  uninterruptedly.

There are many advantages in shopping on-line; also there are some disadvantages.

>> CORRECT 
The first thing of the advantages is convenience. An on-line shopping mall is located ubiquitously, so customer can always use the shopping mall.

>> The first advantage is convenience. On-line shops are located ubiquitously, so customers can always shop any time and any where they want.

Also, you are able to buy something after meticulous comparison by wondering many internet shop easily.

>> You can  easily and meticulously compare products from one shop to another.  

So you can get better items as a low price.

>> So you can get better items at a low price.
At a company side, they can diminish the cost to start business, as they don\'t have to rent a big place to sell their items. 

>> On the company\'s side, it can diminish or lessen the cost of running it\'s business because they don\'t have to rent a big place to sell it\'s items.
However, there are also some disadvantages.

>> CORRECT 

In case of clothes, consumers cannot wear the clothes, so it might be inconvenience. 

>> Consumers can\'t fit the clothes they buy on-line so it\'s inconvenient.  

And there are frauds that deceive consumers by the way that they send a different item to consumers.

>> Some fool their consumers by delivering different items.   If the technology develope more, i think, all these problems would be removed some day.

>> If the technology will is more developed, I think there will be no problems in the future.