homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
It\'s Friday again. I hope you\'ll have a great weekend.
Anyway, thanks for writing something about yourself.
Though, you\'ve already shared a lot of things about you to me, I still feel excited to know more about you.
I hope you continue to share more. ^^
See you on Monday!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
My name is [이름] and I\'m 11years old.
>>> Correct!
I live in a city in Korea.
>>> Correct!
I go to an elementary school and my favorite subject is math and science.
>>> I go to an elementary school and my favorite subjects are math and science.
I love reading books.
>>> Correct!
My favorite book is Sherlock Holmes or Harry Potter.
>>> My favorite books are Sherlock Holmes and Harry Potter.
I also like chemistry and physics books.
>>> Correct!
My favorite music is \'In My Life\' by the Beatles.
>>> Correct!
Beatles are the first singer and band I\'ve really liked.
>>> The Beatles is the first band I\'ve really liked.
I think their songs are all beautiful, but the reason why this one is my favorite is because even though the words are sad, the way they sing it is kind of reassuring.
>>> I think their songs are all beautiful but the main reason this one is my favorite is because even the lyrics of their songs are sad, the way they sing is kind of reassuring.
It\'s really a pity that George Harrison died from a cancer and John Lennon got shot by a man.
>>> Correct!
I also love to travel different countries.
>>> I also love to travel to different countries.
My all-time dream is to travel around the world.
>>> Correct!
I\'d love to backpacking travel in Europe, to see every corner of it.
>>> I\'d love to go backpacking through Europe to see every corner of it.
I think I would like to go to Greenwich observatory to see the start of time.
>>> Correct!
Then I\'d love to visit Liverpool to see where the Beatles came from.
>>> Correct!
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