Homework

Dear [이름],

A marvelous Thursday! ^.^

To start, I would like to thank you once again for doing your homework! ^^

You answered the question well.

However, you need to check the suggestions I placed below your sentences.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

I think one of the most important skill which is a person should learn to be successful in the world is language.

>> I think one of the most important skills which a person should learn to be successful in the world is being multilingual.

Now a days is globalize.

>> Nowadays, everything is globalized.

Boundaries are lost almost meaning.

>> Boundaries are lost by different meaning.

>> OR: Boundaries are lost in different ways. 

So we should learn other countries\'s languages and cultures to communicate with them.

>> Therefore, we should learn other countries\' languages and cultures to communicate with people who have different nationalities.

Whatever which language it is, it\'s better to learn other languages.

>> CORRECT!