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What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

I think that is effort is a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today.

>> I think effort is the most important thing that a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today.

There are two reasons.

>> CORRECT!

The first reason is We can take a chance.

>> The first reason is we can take a chance.

If we don\'tmake an effort, when we have a chance, we can\'t take it.

>> If we don\'t make an effort, when we have a chance, we can\'t take it.

When we make an effort, we can have a good resolt.

>> When we make an effort, we can have a good result.

The second reason is we wins with ourself.

>> The second reason is we win by being ourselves.

If we do not make an effort, it means we lose the game with ourself.

>> If we do not make an effort, it means we lose the game by ourselves.

So in order to win the game with ouself, we have to make an effort.

>> Therefore, in order to win the game by ourselves, we have to make an effort.

Korean History

After Seonjo died, Gwanghae became a king.

>> CORRECT!

He made a neew tax system in order to improve trade and farmers\' life.

>> He made a new tax system in order to improve trade and farmers\' lives.

But Injo effected a millitary coup, and Injo became a king.

>> However, Injo effected a military coup, and he became the king.