homework

HELLO [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework.

Have a nice weekend ahead!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

I agree with the idea the number of the face-to-face communications decreases as a development of the technology.

>> I agree with the idea that face-to-face communication will slowly vanish into thin air because of the development of technology.

Instead of meeting someone in person, we talk to each other through internet or sending a message, because of its convenience.

>> Instead of meeting someone in person, we prefer to talk to someone through the Internet or sending a message because it\'s convenient.

For example, in order to economize the time to go to an education institute, we utilize the on-line class.

>> For example, instead of wasting our time going to institute, we prefer having on-line classes.

Also, when doing team-task in a university with many people, I met them by a chatting application without any direct meeting.

>> When I\'m doing a team-task or a group-task I communicate with my group mates through a chatting application.
However, there are some advantages in meeting someone in person.

>> CORRECT 

It help them to make more closer relationship.

>> It helps them have a closer relationship.

Because meeting in person gives people intimate feeling.

>> Meeting someone in person creates an intimate feeling.

Also they can share their own emotion much better.

>> In addition, they can also share their thoughts and feelings much better.
We have to choose the way to meet someone, by internet or face-to-face, considering the goal of the meeting.

>> We have the right to choose on how we communicate with someone. It can be via Internet or face-to-face.