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2017-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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I want to live untill 90 years old because I want to see the wedding of my grandchildren How old do you want to live?

Hello, sir [이름]! :)

Thanks for doing your homework today.

I want to live until 70 or 75 years old.

I am afraid that if I reach 90, I wont be able to stand up or take a bath on my own anymore. :p

See you in class!

Happily,

Teacher JACEY ^_^)/

I want to live untill 90 years old because I want to see the wedding of my grandchildren

>> I want to live until 90 years old because I want to see the wedding of my grandchildren.

>> OR : I want to live until 90 years old because I want to witness the wedding of my grandchildren.

How old do you want to live?

>> Correct!

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