Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Resolving problems between individuals or groups is important. What should be considered or kept in mind in resolving problems between individuals or groups? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.
To resolve the problems, we need to think about it objectively. It's because at the severe problems we ususally release our intellect. So we need to consider the problems and find some solution. Furthermore, write about the problems is one of the great way to solve the problems. In that way, I can see what is the problem, and why I feeel it's the problems. So I think these two ways are nice to resolving problems.
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A thrilling Thursday to us! ^.^
First of all, I would like to apologize for checking your homework so late.
I am so sorry.
Secondly, I also would like to say sorry for the absence I made last Tuesday.
I couldn\'t attend our class because of terrible body condition.
Thirdly, I know that you waited for my call yesterday.
I\'m sincerely sorry for I wasn\'t able to connect with you, because we had some technical difficulties at that time.
This problem also happened to other teachers and students.
OMG!
A lot of things happened yesterday that made teachers and the management terribly busy.
I hope you are not upset.
Anyway, thank you for doing your homework! ^^
However, you need to be careful with the following:
1. Spelling;
2. Articles;
3. Sentence Structure;
4. Punctuation Marks; and
5. Adverbs.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
*CREATIVE WRITING: Resolving problems between individuals or groups is important. What should be considered or kept in mind in resolving problems between individuals or groups? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.
To resolve the problems, we need to think about it objectively.
>> To resolve problems, we need to think about them objectively.
>> OR: In resolving problems, we need to think about them objectively.
It\'s because at the severe problems we ususally release our intellect.
>> It\'s because we usually release our intellect at serious problems.
So we need to consider the problems and find some solution.
>> Therefore, we need to consider the problems and find some solutions.
Furthermore, write about the problems is one of the great way to solve the problems.
>> Furthermore, writing about the problems is one of the great ways to resolve them.
In that way, I can see what is the problem, and why I feeel it\'s the problems.
>> In that way, we can clearly identify what the problems are, and we can comprehensively know why we feel they are problems.
So I think these two ways are nice to resolving problems.
>> For those reasons, I think these two ways are nice to use to resolve problems.
>> OR: Thus, I think these two ways are nice to use to resolve problems.
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