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Sir [이름]^^
I remember, a few years ago, I and my friend talked about cohabitation.
Research shows that most couples who choose to cohabit before getting married have a higher chance of having a happier and
a more satisfying marriage.
However, my friend, who is a devout Christian, told me that marriage is a sign of responsibility.
Marrying the woman you love assures that you are eternally responsible for her^^
Wow! I actually felt goose bumps after hearing that~
On the other hand, I really go for the freedom of choosing the one we will get married to~
Let us just take things logically and slowly, instead of dealing with it emotionally *_*
Marriage is not only a matter of a couple but also a matter of the whole family.
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A long time ago, there were blind marriages in Korean society, which the boy and girl were typically told to get married without a right to consent or dissent.
>>CORRECT!
With people getting civilized and enlightened, autonomous marriages began to emerge in our community.
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However, autonomous marriages have never offered any guarantees of love and respect in marital life.
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It is because their love could abruptly end up being cold and dysfunctional although they deeply fell in love with each other once.
>>CORRECT!
Accordingly, nowadays marriages are still evolving in some ways such as quasi-arranged marriages in Korea.
>>Accordingly, nowadays, marriages are still evolving in some ways such as quasi-arranged marriages in Korea.
>>Accordingly, contemporary marriages are still evolving in some ways such as quasi-arranged marriages in Korea.
Youths tend to rely on their strong emotion when making a decision, and they easily regret it.
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After parents, matchmakers and friends make introductions, the couple could date for a certain period and get married or not.
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I think that dating is a practice of receiving while a marriage life is a practice of giving love and respect.
>> I think that dating is a practice of receiving while a married life is a practice of giving love and respect.
Everyone has attractiveness, so managing and deepening love is more meaningful than choosing love.
>>Everyone has attractiveness, so managing and deepening love are more meaningful than choosing love.
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