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2017-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I prefer getting up early and start the day's work. One of the reasons why I prefer getting up early is because if you start the work early, you finish it earlier. I think of s[이름]ping as wasting time, so if you wake up early and s[이름]p late, you have more time being awake than starting your day late. With that spare time, you can do whatever you want, so I'll have more time to read books and listen to music. Another reason why I'd prefer getting up early is because I can concentrate better at morning and my thoughts get a little blurry at night, so I'll finish my work with smaller amount of time at morning than at night, which will save me a lot of time. Also, I feel better knowing that I did my work for today. If I delay the work, it feels like it's a weight, but if I finish the work, the weight is gone, and I can do whatever I want. These were the reasons why I prefer getting up early and start my day earlier.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

I got what you mean and I agree with you.

I also prefer starting my day early and accomplishing things at an early time.

If we start working on something early, we\'ll be able to finish it early, too.

So at night, we\'ll be able to settle down.

Anyway, enjoy your day!

 

Always,

~Teacher Shanee^^,


I prefer getting up early and start the day\'s work.

>>> Correct!

One of the reasons why I prefer getting up early is because if you start the work early, you finish it earlier.

>>> Correct!

I think of s[이름]ping as wasting time, so if you wake up early and s[이름]p late, you have more time being awake than starting your day late.

>>> Correct!

With that spare time, you can do whatever you want, so I\'ll have more time to read books and listen to music.

>>> Correct!

Another reason why I\'d prefer getting up early is because I can concentrate better at morning and my thoughts get a little blurry at night, so I\'ll finish my work with smaller amount of time at morning than at night, which will save me a lot of time.

>>> Another reason why I\'d  prefer getting up early is because I can concentrate better in the morning and thoughts get a little blurry at night. So, I finish my work in a shorter amount of time in the morning than at night, which saves me a lot of time.

Also, I feel better knowing that I did my work for today.

>>> Correct!

If I delay the work, it feels like it\'s a weight, but if I finish the work, the weight is gone, and I can do whatever I want.

>>> Correct!

These were the reasons why I prefer getting up early and start my day earlier.

>>> Correct!

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