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2017-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Who among your friends can be too loud? How are you going to ask that person to simmer down? ==> Among my friends, there is a talkative person. Sometimes when we meet together, he speaks a lot of things and speaks loudly as if he really wants to talk about something. At that time, I always say to him, how about to listen another people say. I think listening is more important than speaking. In my case, I am not a talkative and I don't speak loudly.

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Hurrah! At least there is someone who is spicing up your life. It can really be annoying at times but I know that you can manage. I am glad that you tell him how you feel, so after some time, he would realize how he is behaving. Oh, I\'m going to catch you again on the next board. Thanks, James! -Klein-Who among your friends can be too loud?How are you going to ask that person to simmer down?==> Among my friends, there is a talkative person. >>Correct!Sometimes when we meet together, he speaks a lot of things and speaks loudly as if he really wants to talk about something. >>Sometimes, when we meet, he speaks loudly when he wants to talk about a lot of things.At that time, I always say to him, how about to listen another people say.>>At that time, I always tell him, \"How about listening to what other people are saying?\" I think listening is more important than speaking. >>Correct! In my case, I am not a talkative and I don\'t speak loudly. >>In my case, I am not talkative and I don\'t speak loudly.

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