homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Which country would you like to visit? Why do you want to go there?
My favorite country is England.
Because I can see a two floor bus and I like Enland's food.
And I can take a picture on Big Ben.
I hope Ican ride a London Eyes.
So I want to go to the England.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. I also hope that you can visit London and enjoy your vacation there.^^
T. Kelly^^
My favorite country is England.
>> Correct.
Because I can see a two floor bus and I like Enland\'s food.
>> Because I can see a two-floor bus and I like England\'s food.
And I can take a picture on Big Ben.
>> And I can take a picture of the Big Ben.
I hope Ican ride a London Eyes.
>> I hope I can ride the London Eye.
So I want to go to the England.
>> So, I want to go to England.
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