Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Cite an example where you see daylight.
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In my case, I try to learn English with you for 5 months.
Nowadays, I have chances to talk with foreigners, a chines person and a Japaneses person.
In the past, I was afraid to speak English with them.
But In present,I try to speak with them what I want.
Thanks for your effort, English speaking is easier than before.
I really appreciate your effort about upgrading of my English speaking ability.
I am feeling that I am getting a small achievement in English.
It was a good example where I see daylight.
But as you know, I have to improve my listening ability also.
Maybe it takes long time to improve it but I will try to do it.
Anyway I am happy because I get a small improvement in English.
Thank you very much, Klein.
Have a nice day.
강사 첨삭
I see daylight here, James!
Thank you for sharing what you have on mind.
Allow me to tell you once more how much I appreciate all your efforts in improving your skills. You always participate in our classes, which I truly love.
Once again, thank you!
I am wondering; are you still listening to the materials I suggested you to listen to when you are taking a shower, or simply resting?
You do not have to think too much, my friend.
Aha! I think I better recommend some songs.
I\'ll check my playlist.
May you continue to have a good time, James!
You just completed my day.
Stay safe!
-Klein-
Cite an example where you see daylight.==> In my case, I try to learn English with you for 5 months.
>>CorrectNowadays, I have chances to talk with foreigners, a chines person and a Japaneses person.
>>Nowadays, I have chances of talking with foreigners like Chinese and Japanese.In the past, I was afraid to speak English with them. >>Correct
But In present,I try to speak with them what I want.>>But at present, I try to tell them what I want.
Thanks for your effort, English speaking is easier than before.>>Thank for your effort. Speaking English is easier than before.
I really appreciate your effort about upgrading of my English speaking ability.>>I really appreciate your effort for upgrading my English speaking ability.
I am feeling that I am getting a small achievement in English.>>Correct
It was a good example where I see daylight.>>Correct
But as you know, I have to improve my listening ability also.>>Correct
Maybe it takes long time to improve it but I will try to do it.>>Correct!Anyway I am happy because I get a small improvement in English.>>Correct
Thank you very much, Klein.
>>CorrectHave a nice day.
>>Correct!
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