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2017-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Cite an example where you see daylight. ==> In my case, I try to learn English with you for 5 months. Nowadays, I have chances to talk with foreigners, a chines person and a Japaneses person. In the past, I was afraid to speak English with them. But In present,I try to speak with them what I want. Thanks for your effort, English speaking is easier than before. I really appreciate your effort about upgrading of my English speaking ability. I am feeling that I am getting a small achievement in English. It was a good example where I see daylight. But as you know, I have to improve my listening ability also. Maybe it takes long time to improve it but I will try to do it. Anyway I am happy because I get a small improvement in English. Thank you very much, Klein. Have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

I see daylight here, James! Thank you for sharing what you have on mind. Allow me to tell you once more how much I appreciate all your efforts in improving your skills. You always participate in our classes, which I truly love. Once again, thank you! I am wondering; are you still listening to the materials I suggested you to listen to when you are taking a shower, or simply resting? You do not have to think too much, my friend. Aha! I think I better recommend some songs. I\'ll check my playlist. May you continue to have a good time, James! You just completed my day. Stay safe! -Klein- Cite an example where you see daylight.==> In my case, I try to learn English with you for 5 months. >>CorrectNowadays, I have chances to talk with foreigners, a chines person and a Japaneses person. >>Nowadays, I have chances of talking with foreigners like Chinese and Japanese.In the past, I was afraid to speak English with them. >>Correct But In present,I try to speak with them what I want.>>But at present, I try to tell them what I want. Thanks for your effort, English speaking is easier than before.>>Thank for your effort. Speaking English is easier than before. I really appreciate your effort about upgrading of my English speaking ability.>>I really appreciate your effort for upgrading my English speaking ability. I am feeling that I am getting a small achievement in English.>>Correct It was a good example where I see daylight.>>Correct But as you know, I have to improve my listening ability also.>>Correct Maybe it takes long time to improve it but I will try to do it.>>Correct!Anyway I am happy because I get a small improvement in English.>>Correct Thank you very much, Klein. >>CorrectHave a nice day. >>Correct!

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