homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: Nowadays we are producing more and more waste. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of garbage produced?
i think the people seem to not feel the need to separate garbage collection
and i used to see some people to throw the rubbish on the street
so what governments should do is more to install the rubbish bins on the street and we don`t have to leave the food if that`s possible
강사 첨삭
i think the people seem to not feel the need to separate garbage collection
so what governments should do is more to install the rubbish bins on the street and we don`t have to leave the food if that`s possible
>> I think the people seem to not feel the need to separate garbage collection.
and i used to see some people to throw the rubbish on the street
>> I also use to see some people throw their garbage on the street.
so what governments should do is more to install the rubbish bins on the street and we don`t have to leave the food if that`s possible
>> So the government should install more garbage bins on the street so we don\'t have to throw the left over food anywhere.
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