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2017-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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If I wanted to reward myself what might l give present myself. Maybe that present is cartoon book. Because I feel so happy when I read cartoon book at café. I buy some cartoon book when I need energy or I want to become happy. Teacher I think I don’t exactly understand homework. That means was i get some reward how can I admire myself. Right? 

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thanks a lot for accomplishing your homework!

You did really great. I always appreciate your effort. I hope you\'ll never get tired of doing your homework and improving your writing skills. About your homework, I was asking if what gift would you like to give to yourself?

Have a great day!^^

~T. Eunice~



If I wanted to reward myself what might l give present myself. 

>> If I want to reward myself what present I would like to have?

Maybe that present is cartoon book. Because I feel so happy when I read cartoon book at café.

>>I like cartoon books because I feel so happy whenever I read it especially at the cafe.
I buy some cartoon book when I need energy or I want to become happy.
>> I buy some cartoon books when I need some energy or I want to be happy.


Teacher I think I don’t exactly understand homework. That means was i get some reward how can I admire myself. Right?

>>Teacher I think I don’t exactly understand my homework. Does it mean if I get some reward how can I admire myself, right?


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