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Because of growing population and massive industrial development, it is inevitable for our countries to produce waste.
Here in the Philippines, our government carries out several river, forest and watershed rehabilitation programs, but unfortunately, we, the citizens, take them for granted.
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Some countries generate more waste than others.
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I have heard that Japan issues about one-third less rubbish per person than the US.
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We can see some photos that plastic clogs rivers and lakes in developing cities.
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Some of discarded materials are recycled or composted, and most are landfilled or incinerated.
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My household waste volumes tend to triple in the week after holidays such as Christmas, Chooseok and the lunar New Near\'s Day.
>>My household waste volumes tend to triple in the week after holidays such as Christmas, Chooseok and Lunar New Year\'s Day.
Excessive packaging is one of the most significant culprits of producing garbage.
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Our cooking culture is also generating a lot of rubbish.
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Even though our central and local governments have been trying to manage the waste-concerned policies including recycling, we had better pay attention to some solid waste to be landfilled.
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We have to reduce the amount of garbage bags much less than now because landfills are very limited given our small territory.
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As urbanization increases, construction and demolition also contribute a large fraction by mass to the
>>As urbanization increases, construction and demolition also contribute a large fraction by mass to the (I am very excite to hear its continuation tomorrow! Yey!)
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