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2017-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Hello Chloe It was really great to meet you yesterday. I really want to improve my speaking through this class with you. I listened the record file and I was really ashamed. It helped me clearly realize where I am now. I will try harder and review my class. I have questions. First one is about my answer. When you teach and explain, is there some expressions that I can use to say that I understand you?In the record file,I was telling you only "yes." what is the best way to sound better when I stop to remind some words? I don`t know I make pauses so long time. It is really difficult to recall easy and simple words.. And the following is my answer about last homework. HOMEWORK 1. Obstinate -> stubborn 2. Obsolete -> No longer in use 3. Ordeal -> A difficult experience 4. Outrage -> Anger and Shock 5. Ovation -> Applause Hope all is well with you and see you tomorrow :)

강사 첨삭

Hello, Acrina!

It was my pleasure to meet you, too.

Don\'t worry we are going to improve your English together.

Other expressions that you can use are; you are right, you are correct, I agree.

It is okay when you stop for a while.

That is normal.

It is better to think first before you speak.

That is a good practice though.

You can do it!

~Teacher Chloe  

Hello Chloe
>>Hello, Chloe!
It was really great to meet you yesterday.

>>Correct!
I really want to improve my speaking through this class with you.

>>Correct!
I listened the record file and I was really ashamed.

>>I listened to the recorded file and I was really ashamed.  
It helped me clearly realize where I am now.

>>Correct!
I will try harder and review my class.
>>I will try harder to review for our class.
I have questions.

>>Correct!
First one is about my answer.
>>Correct!  

When you teach and explain, is there some expressions that I can use to say that I understand you?

>>When you explain, are there some expressions that I cause use instead of \"I understand you\"?

In the record file,I was telling you only \"yes.\"
>>In the recorded file, I was only answering you \"Yes\".
what is the best way to sound better when I stop to remind some words?

>>What is the best way to sound better when I stop and think of some words?

I don`t know I make pauses so long time.

>>I never realized that I make long pauses.

It is really difficult to recall easy and simple words..
>>It is really difficult to remember easy and simple words.
And the following is my answer about last homework.
>>The following are my answers for my homework.
HOMEWORK
1. Obstinate -> stubborn
>>Correct!
2. Obsolete -> No longer in use
>>Correct!
3. Ordeal -> A difficult experience
>>Correct!
4. Outrage -> Anger and Shock
>>Correct!
5. Ovation -> Applause
>>Correct!

Hope all is well with you and see you tomorrow :)

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