Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you want to sink your teeth into again today?
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As you know, I am not in good condition today.
So I cannot focus on my work.
I need a break for overcoming this situation.
But I cannot get a break because I have many works in the company.
Bad condition reduces work efficiency.
So, at first, I will make a time to rest.
Although it is not full day but several hours, I need times to recover.
Second thing is an environment of working place.
When the office environment is silent, I can sink my teeth into easily.
So I will find a silent place and do work hard.
강사 첨삭
Rise and shine, James!
I am glad that you know how to counter such unwanted feeling. Also, thank you for completing your homework, my friend!
Look at the \"CORRECT\" marks below! I cannot even count them!
GREAT WORK, JAMES!
I hope you feel that your practice is paying off.
Take it easy at work again and catch you later.
-Klein-
What do you want to sink your teeth into again today?==> As you know, I am not in good condition today.>>Correct
So I cannot focus on my work.>>Correct
I need a break for overcoming this situation.>>Correct
But I cannot get a break because I have many works in the company.>>But I cannot get or take a break because I have much work in the company.
Bad condition reduces work efficiency.>>Correct
So, at first, I will make a time to rest. >>So, first, I will make time to rest.
Although it is not full day but several hours, I need times to recover.
>>Although it is not the whole day but several hours, I need time to recover.Second thing is an environment of working place.>>The second thing is the environment of the working place.
>>The second thing is the workplace environment.
When the office environment is silent, I can sink my teeth into easily.>>When the office environment is silent, I can sink my teeth into something easily.
So I will find a silent place and do work hard.
>>So, I will find a silent place and work hard.
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