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2017-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Writing Exercise: What do you wish you could change about the world? I want to change about the 'study' Because nowadays If i'm study well, go to a good university, and I can live comfortably. So This makes it difficult to live with people who have a talent or enthusiasm.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!(^_^) A happy Tuesday to you!   You can still pursue your talent or your passion while studying. It\'s good to have a positive outlook in live, so I hope you\'ll be more optimistic. We can talk about your dreams or ambitions tomorrow. See you then! :)   _T. Mayleen ^.^   I want to change about the \'study\' Because nowadays If i\'m study well, go to a good university, and I can live comfortably. >> I want to change the idea of \'studying\' that I can only live a comfortable if I\'ll go to a good university.   So This makes it difficult to live with people who have a talent or enthusiasm. >> This makes it difficult for people who are talented but are not good academically.

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