Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.
I'm prefer to travel with companion (not many people). Actually I think 2-4 are enough. It's because If travel with companion, we can take a picture each other, and won't feel lonely. And companion is more confidence than alone. It will be fun!!! I wanna go travel to anywhere......(T_T).
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A thrilling Thursday to us once again! ^.^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts by doing your homework! ^^
However, you need to be careful with
sentence structure.
Be sure that your sentences are complete and correctly constructed.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: I also want to travel anywhere. Let\'s go together! ^.^
*CREATIVE WRITING: Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.
I\'m prefer to travel with companion (not many people).
>> I prefer to travel with a companion or few companions.
>> OR: I prefer traveling with companions but not with many people.
Actually I think 2-4 are enough.
>> Actually, I think being with 2 to 4 people is enough.
It\'s because If travel with companion, we can take a picture each other, and won\'t feel lonely.
>> It\'s because if I travel with companions, we can take pictures of each other and together, and we won\'t feel lonely.
And companion is more confidence than alone.
>> In addition, having companions gives me more confidence than being alone.
It will be fun!!!
>> CORRECT!
I wanna go travel to anywhere......(T_T).
>> I want to travel anywhere... (T_T)
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