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Humanity have utilize the nature in order to live since many years ago.

>> Humanity has utilized nature for many years.

As the development of and the advancement of capitalism, humans have much more devastate the nature to gain more profits.

>> As the development and advancement of capitalism, humans devastated nature for their personal interests.

Inordinate demolition of the nature may give humans a short-term benefit,but it will be a loss in a long-term perspective. It is same to animals aroud us.

>> Demolition of nature gives a short-term benefit and a long-term problem to us and the animals around us.

As excessive devastation of the nature are not sustainable, excessive hunting animals may cause some species of animals to extinction. 

>> The massive devastation of nature and the excessive hunting of animals cause the animals to be extinct.

Already some species were extinct and some are encountering the crisis of extinction.

>> Some species are already extinct and some are near extinction.
However we cannot live without exploiting the nature.

>> However we can\'t live without exploiting nature.

We already are getting many thing from the nature from foods to electronic powers.

>> We get a lot of things from nature through the food down to electronic power.

So stopping all demolition of nature such as deforestation and hunting is impossible. 

>> Prohibiting people to exploit nature is impossible.
Therefore we have to use the nature within the ability of nature\'s resilience.

>> Therefore we have help to bring back nature\'s resilience.