Homework
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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
Composition Writing: Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
I think received money as a school, it should pay for students and school. Like make new scholarships, or fix the school's building to evalate student's welfare. It's not their own money. So I think it should pay as a public way.
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... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
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Composition Writing: Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
I think received money as a school, it should pay for students and school.
>> I think the money that the school received should be used for students and the school itself.
Like make new scholarships, or fix the school\'s building to evalate student\'s welfare.
>> For instance, the school management should make more new scholars or fix the school\'s building or buildings to elevate students\' welfare.
It\'s not their own money.
>> CORRECT!
So I think it should pay as a public way.
>> Therefore, I think it should be used for the public.
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