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Hello there [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for writing in our composition board today even if your hands are full.
I truly appreciate your effort.
I agree when you said volunteering can change a person\'s perspective in life.
Mine did and everyday I am thankful for it.
Volunteering made me more compassionate and kind towards the less fortunate.
I came to realize that I am beyond blessed.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.
Let\'s talk again on Monday. :)
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry :)
I think forced volunteerism is nesessary because it makes students have a chance to realize something in life.
>> I think forced volunteerism is necessary because it makes students have a chance to realize something in life.
OR >> I think forced volunteerism is necessary because it gives students a chance to realize something in life.
When I was in school, spending some time on volunteering was a duty.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When I was in school, volunteering was mandatory.
So I did volunteer work with my friend and I made my life worth living.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That\'s why I volunteered with my friend and it changed my life for the better.
Therefore, forced volunteerism can motivate students to volunteer by themselves in the future.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In conclusion, forced volunteerism can motivate students to volunteer by themselves in the future.
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