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World technology are growing and evolving every day
>> The world of technology are growing and evolving each day.
So machine might replace people in the future
>> And machines might replace people in the future.
I think hospitality job will disappear like cashier and taxi driver.
>> I think jobs like in the areas of hospitality will be replaced by robots as well as the cashiers and the taxi drivers.
Also factory workers will soon disappear.
>> Also, factory workers might soon be replaced by robots.
I heard that machine already has replaced the factory workers.
>> I have heard that machines has already replaced the factory workers.
So they have lost gradually of work after that unemployed people will increase and then they may riot as destroying machines.
>> And if human work will be replaced by robots, then unemployment may rise and may lead to violence such as riots and destroying the machines.
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