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Thanks a lot [이름] for writing this.
I appreciate your effort and I agree with your opinions.
You are right when you said that that where you study isn\'t that important.
What matters most is the thing that you learned. C\")
Anyway, let\'s talk again on Monday. See you!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Prestigious are actually kind of unfair because it is the matter of how much money you have.
>>> Prestigious schools are kind of unfair because it is a matter how much money you have.
The rich kids go to private schools and the universities see what kind of educations students received.
>>> Correct!
But if I could pick a university, I think I\'d like to go to MIT(Massachusetts Institute of Technology) or University of Stanford.
>>> Correct!
I want to study physics.
>>> Correct!
I like to think of it as if you study physics you understand the world beside you as best as you can.
>>> I like to think if I study physics, I will be able to understand how the world around us works.
It might be also the reason why I like reading books so much.
>>> Correct!
You can understand the world, people, and whole lot of more things without really experiencing it.
>>> You can understand the world, people and a whole lot of things without really experiencing them.
And in physics, you can go above and beyond as you want, but there are certain rules you have to follow.
>>> Correct!
I think what\'s really interesting about math and science is that you can learn the world, so I think I\'d like to study in MIT or Stanford, but I think where you study isn\'t that important.
>>> I think what\'s really interesting about math and science is that you can learn about the world, so I think I\'d like to study in MIT or Stanford. But I think where you study isn\'t that important.
It\'s what you learn from there that matters, but the world doesn\'t see it that way.
>>> Correct!
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