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It is undeniable that some jobs are irreplaceable~
While companies can definitely save a lot of money and increase productivity because of increased accuracy and precision, high risk jobs which you mentioned should be handled by us, humans^^
As you said before, it is a double-edged sword, not everything happens perfectly, as it also has negative points.
Thanks for doing this, Sir! See you!
According to a study, within 10 years, the first robotic pharmacists will appear, 10% of cars on the road in the US will be autonomous vehicles, and artificial intelligence will carry out 30% of audits of companies.
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Computers are replacing more and more jobs because of the fast digitalization.
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In high risk jobs that may be lost because of digitalization, there are telemarketers, tax accountants, sports judges, legal secretaries, coffee shop workers, deliverers and office secretaries.
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Recently for years, companies have taken \'an offshoring\' policy.
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From it, underdeveloping nations have attracted the foreign companies\' investment, learned the advanced technologies, and increased the people\'s income.
>>From it, underdeveloped nations have attracted the foreign companies\' investment, learned the advanced technologies, and increased the people\'s income.
However, with foreign companies getting digitalized work forces, re-shoring situations that companies go back home will emerge in the near future.
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This could cause very serious problems for developing countries.
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The Fourth Industrial Revolution might provoke winner-take-all effects.
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