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2017-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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According to a study, within 10 years, the first robotic pharmacists will appear, 10% of cars on the road in the US will be autonomous vehicles, and artificial intelligence will carry out 30% of audits of companies. Computers are replacing more and more jobs because of the fast digitalization. In high risk jobs that may be lost because of digitalization, there are telemarketers, tax accountants, sports judges, legal secretaries, coffee shop workers, deliverers and office secretaries. Recently for years, companies have taken 'an offshoring' policy. From it, underdeveloping nations have attracted the foreign companies' investment, learned the advanced technologies, and increased the people's income. However, with foreign companies getting digitalized work forces, re-shoring situations that companies go back home will emerge in the near future. This could cause very serious problems for developing countries. The Fourth Industrial Revolution might provoke winner-take-all effects.

강사 첨삭

It is undeniable that some jobs are irreplaceable~

While companies can definitely save a lot of money and increase productivity because of increased accuracy and precision, high risk jobs which you mentioned should be handled by us, humans^^

As you said before, it is a double-edged sword, not everything happens perfectly, as it also has negative points.

Thanks for doing this, Sir! See you!

According to a study, within 10 years, the first robotic pharmacists will appear, 10% of cars on the road in the US will be autonomous vehicles, and artificial intelligence will carry out 30% of audits of companies.

>>CORRECT!
 Computers are replacing more and more jobs because of the fast digitalization.

>>CORRECT!
 In high risk jobs that may be lost because of digitalization, there are telemarketers, tax accountants, sports judges, legal secretaries, coffee shop workers, deliverers and office secretaries.

>>CORRECT!
 Recently for years, companies have taken \'an offshoring\' policy.

>>CORRECT!
 From it, underdeveloping nations have attracted the foreign companies\' investment, learned the advanced technologies, and increased the people\'s income. 

>>From it, underdeveloped nations have attracted the foreign companies\' investment, learned the advanced technologies, and increased the people\'s income. 
 However, with foreign companies getting digitalized work forces, re-shoring situations that companies go back home will emerge in the near future.

>>CORRECT!
 This could cause very serious problems for developing countries. 

>>CORRECT!
 The Fourth Industrial Revolution might provoke winner-take-all effects.

>>CORRECT!

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