Homework

Dear [이름],

A majestic Monday to us! ^.^

Thanks a lot for the good composition that you made! ^^

I enjoyed reading it! ^^,

However, I also noticed some errors, so kindly check the suggestions I placed below.

That\'s all for today! ^^

See you tomorrow! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

I think the important qualities of a good son or daughter is don\'t make parents be worry.

>> I think the important quality of a good son or daughter is not to make his or her parents to worry.

Children can choice their life direction, but all of the choices are should in the line of ordinary boundary, like don\'t do crime.

>> Children can choose their lives\' directions, but all of the choices should be in the line of an ordinary boundary. For instance, children should not make crimes.

And give some present for their parents.

>> In addition, they should give some presents for their parents.

I think theses things are enough to being a good child.

>> I think these things are enough to be a good child.